Thursday, February 17, 2011

Poetry

peace park peace park in the school
you are made by the workers
you got light from the sunlight
many people walk pass by

peace park peace park in the school
i see a giant bell in it
i hear the worker talking
i feel the warm breezy wind

peace park peace park in the school
i see the sky like a cotton
i hear the machine digging
i taste flower like honey

Monday, February 7, 2011

Love That Dog

Blue car, blue car is the poetry that the teacher ask us to record it. This poetry is from the book name "Love That Dog". The sources that i use for recording the poetry is garage band because by using the garage band, we can record it and use the other sound that is interesting. I like my video poetry about the blue car blue car, because i add more the sound from the garage band.

Blue car blue car by minhaokao17

After i do blue car blue car poetry, i make my own poetry to record it using the garage band, too. It was really hard to make the poetry with my own words, because each sentences need to be same number of the sound, same number of words and same sound of the last word but different words.
This is the poetry that i write:
  Black owl Black owl in the sky
in the darkness of the night
who could see you standing by
like a people in the sky

i could see you in the night
black owl black owl in the sky
i could see you standing by
like a people in the sky

Black owl black owl by minhaokao17