Thursday, February 17, 2011

Poetry

peace park peace park in the school
you are made by the workers
you got light from the sunlight
many people walk pass by

peace park peace park in the school
i see a giant bell in it
i hear the worker talking
i feel the warm breezy wind

peace park peace park in the school
i see the sky like a cotton
i hear the machine digging
i taste flower like honey

Monday, February 7, 2011

Love That Dog

Blue car, blue car is the poetry that the teacher ask us to record it. This poetry is from the book name "Love That Dog". The sources that i use for recording the poetry is garage band because by using the garage band, we can record it and use the other sound that is interesting. I like my video poetry about the blue car blue car, because i add more the sound from the garage band.

Blue car blue car by minhaokao17

After i do blue car blue car poetry, i make my own poetry to record it using the garage band, too. It was really hard to make the poetry with my own words, because each sentences need to be same number of the sound, same number of words and same sound of the last word but different words.
This is the poetry that i write:
  Black owl Black owl in the sky
in the darkness of the night
who could see you standing by
like a people in the sky

i could see you in the night
black owl black owl in the sky
i could see you standing by
like a people in the sky

Black owl black owl by minhaokao17

Wednesday, January 26, 2011

What are Noun?



 This is a slideshow about the nouns of the 3 things. I do this slide by going to www.flickr.com/creativecommon/ website, then I find the picture about the 3 things that the teacher gave us. Then we download and put it at the slide. After that, we type image by then link the image website to the “image by”. Than, write the nouns that the 3 things have, at least 2 nouns each. After that, put the name and change the background.

Monday, January 17, 2011

My Poetry

We are starting to study poetry in my English class and the thing I understand I think poetry is to share our feeling with many other people about my feeling about the world. I just know that entire thing so far, but I like the poetry because it will improve the writing and can add the vocabulary that we know. I think about being outside of the class is great because we can look at many things outside of the class. The thing I see is many statue like a Chinese old women, a Chinese big bell that is already old, and the international walls with many country in the walls and each country have their own words or slogan, I see a bridge with water under the bridge and I see a mud with many grass on it. About the photographs, I think Mr. Jabiz tell us the thing about the photograph that Mr. Jabiz has taken. All the thing that Mr. Jabiz tells us is about how to write the poetry so is like what the grass or the flowers is look like. So, i will keep studying about the poetry, so i will know deeper about how to write the poetry or what is poetry about.
 
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Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Welcome to Grammar! Writing Sample


In the learner profile, I’ve been an inquirer. Because, last time, at doing the Internet research, I’m very confuse about how to do an Internet research of something. But, the website is the website that the teacher is chosen. I’m very curious, because I already try hard, but I’m still don’t really know how to research the information. I find and find the information, but I’m still didn’t know ho to research it.

So, the thing that I done to solve this problem is to talk to the teacher about the website and use another website to research the information. Then, the teacher said, “Ok, you can use the website that you want to use”. So, I use another website in the computer to research the information. At last, I already done my researching about the information that I need. Then, I arranged the information to many paragraphs. Now, I finish my arrangement of the information.